College project

[Rorschach]

Hey guys, I'm doing a project for college at the moment. I'll try and make this quick, we have created a real business, with insurance and shares. We are making products and selling them for profit. I'm good with computers, so I was given the task of IT manager.

We drafted some logo ideas and from what I could tell, they wanted something like this. I need to present the logo next Tuesday. So I want to show it here, and hopefully get some pointers and any advice to improve it all together. The idea generally has to be kept the same.

[Leo]

Im working on a business plan too !
Anyway the logo is great but try to change the colour of the letters to white or yellow, i might be wrong but you can always try and choose what suits you best

[King Weavilian]

The angel's halo and the wings are of a different art style, I'd stick to one or the other since it makes them both stick out rather than blend together. For example, maybe some cartoon wings to go with the cartoon halo?

Also I agree with Leo on changing the colour of the text, yellow would go well and be the most noticeable. It's probably just me as well, but I don't really like the font. It looks really... I dunno, it just looks really tacky; like you added it in Paint or something.

[Glorious Cake]

I tried to shoop it and help, I found a halo from Google that was drawn, but it looks badly cut out. Also I missed some blue spots.

I suck at photoshop ._.

[BrittTheJoker]

The angel's halo and the wings are of a different art style, I'd stick to one or the other since it makes them both stick out rather than blend together. For example, maybe some cartoon wings to go with the cartoon halo?

Also I agree with Leo on changing the colour of the text, yellow would go well and be the most noticeable. It's probably just me as well, but I don't really like the font. It looks really... I dunno, it just looks really tacky. I'm trying to think of some potential font styles so I'm just not nitpicking.

However, I really like the concept, it's really cool.

I also agreee on changing the font. It sticks out too much and looks like it was added on at the end with no planning. Go to Dafont.com for fonts to match the art style of the wings

I'd suggest something more.. Sketchy.. To match with the wings myself.

http://www.dafont.com/-sketchy-times.font

http://www.dafont.com/faith-collapsing.font

http://www.dafont.com/fff-tusj.font

http://www.dafont.com/holyrose-sale.font

For Example. That's just from a quick 3 minute look around. I dunno about this though, I can't really test them currently.. But something down that line might suit. IT depends on what image you want to portray really. But if you have a look on Dafont.com there should be something to match it

ALso change the Halo to, I agree with that. You're Preferably need a sketchy styled one in order to match the wings really. You could try to make one yourself should google/image sites fail you

Other than that it's looking pretty sweet.

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